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Writer : Rakesh
Contact Writer at : gamecode2k1@rediffmail.com
Location :Bangalore, India
Received : 21/01/2002

Neural cascades…Thoughts on Venus

Characters:
Mr. Ron Barrister, and nostalgia

Prime movers:

Ambience of the room, and a thoughtful character with vivid imagination

Scene:

Location: An evening, Interior of an Imperial British royalty’s Living Room, the light smell of new furniture fills up, Dimly light, with a bonfire, a light breeze blowing through, Bach plays in the background.

Shot 1 :
Ron opens the door of his room to enter, since alone his sensitivity of the surrounding reaches its peak .he senses the ambience.
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Shot 2 :
He thinks of relaxing with wine and listening to Bach. The cool breeze relieves him and his facial muscles.
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Shot 3 :
He moves towards a chair near the bon fire and relishes the surroundings, takes a deep breath and rocks on the chair. Thinks of reading but inertia prevents him, He remains in the chair.
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Shot 4 :
Ron perfectly relaxed ,gets nostalgic, His Thoughts take him back in time, He realizes his experiences, For a moment he pauses , Time and age always progresses with a purpose. Thinks of the women he had been with, during his youth ,was my understanding of the opposite sex come to full circle…
he recalls the statement, " Out of ten commandments Woman Took Nine,Man took one…."(How true …(he thinks)).

Shot 7 : If true can I categorise them ?( he thinks)…His neurons feels like breaking free.. and it cascaded thereafter…as explained below :

( He Dreams of a girl he thought was perfect in all sense , but Ron doesn’t share her with us …!!, he portrays her to us as follows ……)


1) Her Gender : Creates an Impression


2) Her Actions : Validates an Attitude

3) Her Poise : Suits Any Occasion

4) Her Gestures : Aids Persuasion

5) Her Vibes : Initiates a Discussion

6) Her Thoughts : Emphasises Her Presence.

7) Her Character : Magnifies Her Traits.

8) Her Moves : Carries the Signature.

9) Her Passions : Spreads Her Sensitivity.


Shot 8 :

…..And as Ron ponder over the tenth, that can be a a definite Upgrade For her functional self,
he feels like to stop , A stop to his Neural cascades, Ron feels like having relished every moment of it .

He gets up, Looks around feels like every element in the room was watching him relish it. Turns off Bach.
Walks Towards the door opens it. Feels like he has opened the door leading him back to reality..


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